Needs More!
Sorry, but i think that this could have been A LOT better. Here's a list of things to improve:
1. Go more in depth into each topic.
2. Proofread your work. I don't want to learn from someone who cannot use grammar properly.If your not very good at grammar, have a friend who is proofread it for you.
3.Improve your design
4. Add MORE CODE
5. Explain the code. You listed the functions without even telling viewers what they do (ex: gotoAndPlay()). Most people who look at tutorials have never seen these functions before.
It would be a much better tutorial if you put more time into it. Keep trying. 1/5, and 2/10.