PatrickM60's Reviews

[Basic Coding]

Needs More!

Sorry, but i think that this could have been A LOT better. Here's a list of things to improve:

1. Go more in depth into each topic.
2. Proofread your work. I don't want to learn from someone who cannot use grammar properly.If your not very good at grammar, have a friend who is proofread it for you.
3.Improve your design
4. Add MORE CODE
5. Explain the code. You listed the functions without even telling viewers what they do (ex: gotoAndPlay()). Most people who look at tutorials have never seen these functions before.

It would be a much better tutorial if you put more time into it. Keep trying. 1/5, and 2/10.

[Videogames for Barbetta]

Not Bad.

It wasn't bad but it is very repetitive. It got boring for me after about 30 seconds. next time try to add more elements to the game. 2/5

[Keyboard Kids]

Good.

It was a good game. The only real problem is that sometimes some letters would go on top of others.Also it gets a little repetitive. once you've played for about 1 minute you've seen it all.Other than that good game 3/5!

[[oove] Heartbeats]

One of the Best!

WOW! the song is completely flawless. Definitely one of the best I've heard on newgrounds. 10/10, 5/5, downloaded,and learned it on piano. Keep it up!

broove responds:

Thank you.